Hi folks ,I’m new here and I got another track for y’all. ,this is a work in progress. I have a tendency to get hung up on a part and struggle with a complete composition
i would put snare a bit quieter (probably 2-3 dB) and kick too (not that much like snare), and i would bass a little bit louder and eventually sidechain it a tiny bit with kick - and it would be completed ! Nice tune !
Thanks for listening and the pointers, It definitely needs a little work in the mix, unfortunately I don’t have monitors so I mix with Four different sets of headphones then play in the cars trying to get the best sound across all sound sources
Thanks for listening and for the tips will give that a try. Unfortunately I don’t have monitors for an accurate mix so it’s kind of hrs to know how’s it’s going sound when someone else listens
I agree with dendy suggestions. Good song but could be better. There’s no reason to use 4 different sets of headphones all you need is one good one. My suggestion would be is to spice up your song by using different melodies. I hear way to many songs on the Internet that are too repetitious. When I write a song and if there’s two melodies one right after the other one melody might be totally different from the other.
Definitely agree you guys,I have about 20 songs I’m working on at all times,most never get finished,but I feel this has some potential,guess that’s why I shared it ,for some constructive criticism. But I do feel it’s missing something but I feel that way about all my music. as to the headphone thing,I actually have a decent pair of master and dynamic headphones I use(not flat but better than my others) just not convenient to work with on the go or at work which I end up using somewireless earbuds or Apple EarPods.thanks for listening
Cool track. I’d like to see how this develops